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Friday, May 10, 2019

my moment in time writing



so we had to chose a picture and say what is happening, at that time. what we would feel in that picture, like what we smell here wonder and see.

comment on something i could in prove on in my writing. i personally think i could have a better start on the story. the picture that i did for this writing is up at the top

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  1. AnonymousMay 10, 2019 at 2:30 PM

    Hello Rhys. My name is Tane I'm from marshland school. I remember when I did something similar except we had to make an entire short story. You accidentally wrote sip instead of zip

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