Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, April 29, 2019
news report
we had to make a news report about an article of our choice
i think we talk about the article really good
comment if there's something i should improve on i can inprove on talking more
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Hi Rhys
ReplyDeleteI like how your group thought about making a news report that is like a sports show with different people. It was also very brave for you to be on screen - well done! When you add posts onto your blog make sure you explain what the post is about with details. Adding in your punctuation will also help the reader understand what you are writing so remember to go back and check this before posting.