Reflection:
if i had to do this on my own i would not be able to but i had help from Mr pinker
question
please comment and give me feed back on wait i can do better
Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hola Rhys!
ReplyDeleteI love this blog post! Your sentences are descriptive and make sense! i can see that you tried really hard to put this post together and i love that in every post you ask for feedback and that you reflect on the post! that is amazing to see how much progress your making! keep it up!
-Natalia