comment on what i could improve on and i think i could explain how the aliens got there in the first place
Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 17, 2019
Friday, May 10, 2019
my moment in time writing
so we had to chose a picture and say what is happening, at that time. what we would feel in that picture, like what we smell here wonder and see.
comment on something i could in prove on in my writing. i personally think i could have a better start on the story. the picture that i did for this writing is up at the top
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