my haiku poem

this is my haiku poem if you guys don´t know what a haiku poem is it is a poem

with 3 lines but the 1st line you have 5 syllables next line you have 7  syllables and the next line you have 5  syllables and if you want to see my class blog here´s a link

My Mihi

we had to do a Mihi about use and preasent it infront of The class

plz give me some feed back on what i need to inprove