this is my creative writing http://www.pobble365.com/ helped me get some ideas for my story 

comment on what i could improve on and i think i could explain how the aliens got there in the first place 

my moment in time writing

so we had to chose a picture and say what is happening, at that time. what we would feel in that picture, like what we smell here wonder and see.

comment on something i could in prove on in my writing. i personally think i could have a better start on the story. the picture that i did for this writing is up at the top

news report

we had to make a news report about an article of our choice
i think we talk about the article really good
comment if there's something i should improve on i can inprove on talking more

Tigers on the rise in India

we had an  article  from kiwi kids news or dogo news and putt down key words and put them into a sentence and making notes on a t chart

Reflection:
if i had to do this on my own i would not be able to but i had help from Mr pinker
question
please comment and give me feed back on  wait i can do better

my poster to save sea animals

In reading we had to write a poster about how to save sea creatures, this is mine. 

This task was easy and hard because you had to get information and change it into your own ideas. 

I used the internet for this task and my own ideas. 

Please let me know if there is anything I can improve on. 

my haiku poem

this is my haiku poem if you guys don´t know what a haiku poem is it is a poem

with 3 lines but the 1st line you have 5 syllables next line you have 7  syllables and the next line you have 5  syllables and if you want to see my class blog here´s a link

My Mihi

we had to do a Mihi about use and preasent it infront of The class

plz give me some feed back on what i need to inprove